Five
days before the incident happened, Daniel was just a normal teenage boy, going
to school and living life to the fullest. Although Daniel’s family was rather
wealthy, he went to public school where he met his best friend Cole Harper, a
street kid that lacked the certain angst of other street kids. Regardless the
differences between the two they had been best friends for years, and would
walk home together every single day, never failing to pass by the old abandoned
house that separated Daniels neighborhood from Cole’s by a lengthy fence that followed
around about five acres of land that hadn't been tended to for as long as the two
could think to remember, always making mention of how serious it was.
The
building looked like a mansion really, towering with stained glass walls, and
high arches that seemed once beautiful, now hanging by its last thread of life.
Something about the place had always called out to Daniel, although he could
never put his finger on it. It was a curiosity the plagued him since He and
Cole were boys. So as to rid Daniel of this burning curiosity of what lay in
the old abandoned building, the two made a pact that at the end of their senior
year of High School, before both parted ways, they would step foot into the old
rotten mansion- which had never happened before- and see what they could find
out.
The
night of the mission to infiltrate the corroded manor was brisk, the smell of
rain and fall permeating the air. The two boys were to meet each other in front
of the house at seven thirty, but as usual, both of them were late. “Sorry bro,
mom made a huge deal about my dislike for peas.” said Daniel with careless
grin.
“It’s cool;
I just brainstormed whether or not I should even come. This place looks like it
could collapse any second!” Cole said, with an uneasy expression on his face. “Besides,
what do you think that we will find in here anyways? If the place had cool
things inside of it I doubt that it would be ABANDONED.”
Daniel
brushed Coles comments off to the side, knowing good and well that he was determined
to reach the inside of this creepy place. Besides, even if Daniel went in
alone, it wouldn't be long until Cole would follow, for they had a friendship
tighter than a rubber band ball, and Cole wouldn't dare let him be in any kind
of trouble without him. The two of them look for any nearby cars or pedestrians
before climbing over the ten foot high metal gate and both times falling with a
thud followed by a curse word. “Ouch! I fell on my knife.” Cole then draws out
a huge black Gerber tactical knife. “Pretty sweet right? Scored it off my dad a
few days ago, he never noticed. My dad has more weapons than most people have
silverware.”
“I’m
going to pretend I never saw that just in case I get questioned by police when
you murder yourself with that by accident.” Said Daniel with a light hearted
laugh, although having a weapon of that proportion in Coles hands never really
ended well.
The two
walked to the front door and simultaneously kicked it in, not out of necessity,
but more for being able to say that they have now kicked in a door. As they
step into the threshold of the decaying remains of the building, they notice
something on the ground- a book by the title of Mr. Lindens Library. As Daniel picks
up the book He and Cole both notice an awful stench coming from inside the
building, and it smelt like a rotten carcass. At that moment, Daniel and Cole
fell to their better judgment and left the old mansion at a hurried pace, with
the book of Mr. Lindens library in hand.
“You’d
better be careful with that book there, Dan.”
“Psh,
why do you say that?”
Judging
by the way that the old mansion had been left, as if nobody had wanted it, Cole
assumed the same of this peculiar book, but instead replied “I don’t know it
could have asbestos poisoning on it or something.”
Daniel
followed Cole’s sarcastic statement with a chuckle and said “No worries, dude,
if that happens; I can chill in a hospital for months without worry of work or
anything otherwise.”
That
was the last night that Daniel and his family was ever seen, or heard of again.
Police turned his home upside down for clues as to the disappearance of him and
his family, but there was nothing amiss. Cole spent every waking last moment of
his summer in search for his lost best friend, but with all of his efforts
there came nothing. All he could ever think of after that was that book, even
when he grew older and had married. He had warned Daniel about the book, but
now it was too late.
I find this line particularly scary, in light of how many horrible events have come about as the result of weapons in the hands of kids: "Pretty sweet right? Scored it off my dad a few days ago, he never noticed. My dad has more weapons than most people have silverware.” I like your use of dialogue in this story--it sounds natural and that's not easy to do.
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