I
was being followed; that much was for sure because I could feel it. Exactly what I could
feel, I don’t know but I knew it wasn’t friendly and it wanted something, so I
began to run but stumbled and fell only a few yards from where I began, and
pain shoots through my ankle. I look up to see only to familiar fog that blinds
my path three feet away from my face. I turn towards the direction at which I
felt the mysterious presence coming toward me, but there is only the same fog,
and silence.
I
was not imagining this, I know I wasn’t, I could feel a pair of cold eyes
staring into the back of my head, and to me that was enough to believe that I
was in danger. This path was not unfamiliar to me; I walk it every day after
work to get to my house as sort of a short cut instead of walking through all
of the neighboring subdivisions. The path is beaten, and there is hardly anyone
ever on it, and the only ones that travel on it are bike riders, but it is too
dark and foggy for that now. Just me, and the mysterious being that stalks my
every move.

My
throat aches and I realize that I am yelling for help at the top of my lungs,
but no response is returned except the sounds of breaking twigs coming from
behind me. Sweat pouring down my face, I
look back at the noise and a silhouette stands before me about four feet away,
still staring at me.
“What
do you want?” I cry out at the beast. I watch as its three fingered hand draws
into one pointed finger and slowly fixates it on me. I scream before I know
what else to do, and for a moment it is all that I can do. Slowly the beast
lurches towards me, isolating every bone in my body; I cannot walk, I cannot
talk, my body is still aside from the constant shake that convulses my body.
This
cannot be my end I have way too much relying on me, and my mind races back to
the thought of my family standing in front of the house. Mom is watering the
garden and dad is teaching my little brother how to catch a baseball. The
memory shoots a pang through my heart and tears through my eyes. I look to my
right as to escape the frightening sight of this terrible beast standing above
me willing to take my life at any instant, and notice the large drop off that
flows off of the trail. I took my only opportunity and I rolled, not knowing
what was below awaiting me there. Hitting branch after branch, I finally find
the ground, and everything goes black.
I
wake up in the hospital, and the bright lights burn my slowly opening eyes. I
look to my right and see that my arm is in a cast, and my family is by my bed
asleep. Relief courses throughout my body at the sight of safety, and a tear
rolls down my eye. I quickly pull myself together and try to think back on what
had happened on that gruesome walk home, and all that I see is the sight of
those claws pointing at my chest.
I
force myself to relax, although the pain medicine does most of the work, and my
eyes slowly close for rest, and that’s when I hear it again.
Wow! I feel sympathetic and pathos for him whenever his life is flashing before his eyes. I'm glad that he did not die, and he wakes up in the hospital. This is a great story!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story! You are really good with putting details in so that the reader can picture what's going on in the story in their mind!
ReplyDeleteThe image and the description of being followed reminds me of one of my husband's favorite movies, American Werewolf in London. There are lots of great descriptions that move along the action but I especially like: "I watch as its three fingered hand draws into one pointed finger and slowly fixates it on me. I scream before I know what else to do..."
ReplyDeleteTHIS REALLY HELPED ME SO MUCH
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